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News Since…October?!

Yeesh, I sort of died over here, didn’t I? I deeply apologize, everybody, but hopefully my explanation will make up for it.

This last semester, I was taking a class similar to Independent Study, in the sense that it was me working on a story one-on-one with a professor. In this case, I chose to start revising the first book in the Shadow Day Quartet. There were problems with the plot that I couldn’t figure out what was wrong, and I definitely needed some advice. Right before I met with the professor, I did an exercise that made me realize that I had twice, if not three times, the amount of characters I needed, and then Prof. Chester pointed out I was lacking a direct antagonist for the main character, then helped me with setting Mari and Natile apart, which gave me a huge plot hole in the newly revised plot line…which is where I’m stuck at now. I need to fix the plot, but I’m roughly a third of the way through the rewrite, with only the first four chapters needing a severe overhaul due to me relearning the important parts of my craft. I brought either a revised plot (it took me a few times to get something solid) or a chapter every week to my meeting with Chester, leading to an average of about 2,250 to 2,750 words a week.

Another class I was taking was Commercial Non-Fiction. These are books like The Diary of Anne-Frank, Longitude, etc. They deal with real events/information, but tell the story like a novel. I had the option of working on my idea to do a study on the various different stories about Anastasia Romanov, but in the end realized I would not have the time to do the research I needed. So I defaulted and wrote about jousting, both in medieval times and in modern medieval fairs/shows. Most of the stuff currently written is everything I don’t need research for thanks to my AOA, aside from the one interview I did manage to get in and the necessary little bit of intell I got on different horse breeds beyond my own handfuls of knowledge… I got most of my part done with it, and the book really just needs me to finish doing interviews to add other people’s opinion/knowledge. That said, I wrote 25,000 words in a very condensed time frame and was quite ready to kill things by the end of it. Each week once the writing started was 4,000 words, required, and then the last one was 5,000.

The final class I was taking was the first half of my graduate project, the second book in the Shadow Day Quartet. It took us quite a while to get my plot beaten down into something that made sense, and the first two chapters are rough. Really rough. I’m used to getting a first draft to get the kinks out before a professor reads it, and it showed. But I finally got my stuff together, and managed to get the first four chapters written. Out of seventeen plus epilogue. The format to this class worked the exact same as the sort-of Independent Study, even with the same professor, only I didn’t necessarily have to turn anything in during a given week (something I found out at the end of the semester, and it saved my bacon). My chapters were also longer, usually from 2,750 to 3,250.

This is all on top of trying to keep my forum RPs alive and weekly prompts, which the prompts alone varied from around 1,200 words to 4,000 words. So lots and lots of writing happened, and something just had to give. Sadly, it was the blog. I had planned though to pick up the blog after my family vacation. Immediately after Dead Week (and my poor advertising students’ early final), I went off to Las Vegas, Nevada for the National Finals Rodeo with my family. Even better, I got to go see Tournament of Kings over at the Excaliber (and make fun of them a little. Great show, but their Arthur story needs help). It was fun, and I even got to leave with more money than I arrived with, thanks to a lot of luck.

Everything seemed to be going alright… And then somebody got on to the return flight from Vegas to Amarillo sick. Guess who got whatever congestion nightmare that was? At first, I thought it was from my ears popping like six times a day from riding the elevator (we were on the 22nd floor of the hotel), but by Sunday I couldn’t breath through my nose, and breathing through my mouth led to coughing. I was still really tired/coughy all the way up to Christmas, when I carpooled back to the Oklahoma Panhandle with my older brother. He asked me to drive up to Tulsa, and we left from there. Along the way, I lost my cruise control on my car (still need to get that looked at, actually…), but thankfully he was driving his up to the panhandle and I got to sleep most of the way thanks to my meds knocking me out like a light.

Now, my wrist has been doing this popping thing whenever I bent it back, and then popping again when I bent it forward, usually only after I’d had a really, REALLY long day of writing. My family informed me in Vegas that this was carpel tunnel, and I needed to start wearing a brace before it got worse. I heard, but since I was having trouble with even the concept of getting oxygen into my body, I hadn’t managed to buy a brace yet. Big. Mistake. Driving back from my brother’s place in Tulsa to my place in Norman without cruise control messed with my wrist sooooo bad… Yeah, writing has become a little bit of a hassle. Thankfully, it has slowly been getting better.

So what has gotten done around here? Well, for one, I’m going to come out and admit to being Eva-Emaria on deviantart.com, as well as in the comment section of webcomics, including Hurrocks Fardel. Now, how the heck is this relevant? For those of you who follow this comic (which should be everyone, its actually really clever and well-paced), there was a contest a few months ago to create characters to be featured in the comic. Since my character, a swan maiden/valkyrie named Eira, won, I’ve been working on her Guard, getting them drawn, bios written, and all posted on my deviantart page. It has taken me almost a year now, but it is finished at last. Very tentatively, I want to someday do a webcomic involving these characters, but I need a few things to happen in Hurrocks Fardel before I attempt to do that, since I need to know more about the world. I also got over the severe burnout that the crazy semester had given me, partially thanks to a new story idea that I’ve added to my list of projects. It’s planned just enough that I won’t go crazy thinking about it.

What are the goals for this semester? Well, one of my classes has me reading basically a book a week, and doing short reports over most of them, four presentations over the others, plus a decent sized final paper. My only other class is finishing my grad novel. In an ideal world, I’m done way early with my second book, like before Spring Break early, so I can be defended and done with it. I have Medieval Fair coming up on April 5, and I need to have my costume and armor (yeah, I’m making armor, be afraid) finished by February 15. And then, provided I’ve done what I need to do to get the grad project done and over with, I’d like to get the first book’s rewrite finished by May.

Outside of writing, I am on the permanent-job hunt for post-graduation, ideally starting June 2 and giving me time to take a two week vacation/work trip up to New Orleans before hand. I’d like to be in an associate professor job, but since I can’t leave Oklahoma for family reasons, I’d be willing to accept just about anything that lets me stay in the rough area where I am. Once I get the job lined up, I get to go house hunting. *rubs hands and cackles* Yep, I’m sick of apartments and am quite ready to be somewhere where there is at LEAST three feet between me and the next house. Plus, I need a fenced in back yard for my poor dog to be moved down here with me.

Now, to the point. What does all this mean for the blog? Basically, I’m ideally going to have the time to start posting on here more regularly, thanks to me finally going, “Rebecca, you DERP, write the post over the week and just schedule it to go up on Thursdays!” I’ll let you all know also when I finish the different books, as well as when my new job/house are lined up. I will definitely want some advice on places to see in New Orleans outside of Bourbon Street and the French Quarter. And with that, I’ll see you all next Thursday!

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New Places to Follow Me!

Hey everyone! Just a quick status update, I suppose, but I thought this stuff was important.

  • There’s now a Facebook page! That’s right, I’m now on Facebook in a capacity of being easily found. The page will list various status updates on different novels, depending on where they are at in the development stage, and will even occasionally give a head’s up to an e-book being free for a short time. The link is now permanently on the website, just scroll down and you’ll find it.
  • I’m now on Goodreads (as an author, not just a reader)! So if you want to add my e-books to your bookshelf, now you can! Just search for the title, the ASIN, or my name, and they should pop right up.

On more of a writing note, Bandit’s Escape is currently in the revision processes with a professor, and at the same time we’re trying to get Bandit’s Chance off the ground. My professor suggested (and I agreed) with getting all four books written and then trying to market it. Ideally, I should have a rough draft (very rough draft) of the fourth book and semi-finalized drafts of the first three in December 2014, and that will be the point where I start querying it out. It’s a year later than I was planning, but I’ll also be ready to move on to another project that point, I’m sure, so maybe it’s for the best that I wait till I have all four roughly done before I send it off to strange people.

And with those announcements, I leave you all in peace until Thursday, when there will be another review ready for you.


Writing: Theme

After harping on the same series for three blog posts in a row, of course I’m going to pick on theme for a little while.

English professors and teachers really harp on themes with their students. As a writer, I can say any theme anything of mine ever has is about 99.9% of the time pure accident. I can see them if I read the stories as an English major,  but as a writer, they aren’t my focus. So why do teachers emphasis theme so much in their courses?

I think some of the problem is a confusion between what is a theme and what is a message. There are a limited number of themes, mostly because they have to be so general. Common ones (i.e. off the top of my head) are coming of age, handling–or in some cases, not handling–grief, discrimination or prejudice of some sort.. See how vague these are? Many can be applied to almost any story. English people can argue the importance of them all they like. I honestly find them pointless as hell and usually meaningless to a reader. Instead, they’ve become terms for critics and book jacket summary writers to throw around like purple prose. It’s stopped being helpful for finding books we like since every time a book that claims to have one of these themes becomes popular, suddenly everything on the shelf has the exact same theme.

The book (or series) message is a little more complicated and sometimes hard to pin down. Some writers claim their books have no message, meant to be purely entertaining reads. Personally, I find those books boring or that there is a message, the writer just didn’t want to admit to it. A message doesn’t have to be some big, deep monster of a thing that’s meant to change the way people think. It could be something simple, like Tamora Pierce’s Protector of the Small series. The first book’s message is treating everyone fairly, and standing up to bullies. Each book has a similar message, even with a bunch of themes tacked on.

The difference between a theme and a message is its specifity, at least for me. If it’s some unconcrete thing that is never really mentioned at all in the text, then it’s a theme and pointless. But if it is mentioned in the text, and the writer is far more obviously trying to convey it to their audience, to give them something to take home at the end of the day, then it’s a message. Again, it could be something really simple.

In my own work, I’m currently revising Mari’s first book, Bandit’s Escape, and outlining the second book, Bandit’s Chance. I can see themes of coming of age, discrimination, feminism, and family being applied to these books without my input, plus lord knows what else I didn’t think of. But the overall message of this series is about out-growing a childhood home, and having to forge a path to find a new one, even in the face of adversity and controversy. I’m also joining the movement to prove female heroes can be strong without sacrificing their femininity or resorting to rape plots. The latter are my biggest pet peeve. It’s becoming a little too common for me. I’m not saying I’ll never use them, but I definitely want to avoid them if at all possible.

More than theme, I think the writer’s message should be looked at, both what they intended and what they actually did write. Themes are cookie-cutter and too general of a lense to reflect on writing, not to mention constantly mixing with message. Focusing on message is better for judging the writer’s intent, and what the point of the book is.


Random Update and What’s Ahead

I’m alive, I promise. I’m just swamped in semester tidings and work and yes. I shall update properly in two weeks. (Feel free to whack me if I don’t.)

As some sort of peace offering, I give you all my projects in the order I am working on them. (Provided editors pick them up, of course.) All titles are semi-tentative.

Shadow Day Quartet
Bandit’s Escape
Bandit’s Chance
Bandit’s Doubt
Bandit’s Return

(Somewhere in between quartet books, there might be a non-fiction book about a princess. Just saying.)

Shadow Hawk
(stand alone)

Vows of Courage Trilogy
Forged by Fear
Born by Blood
Proven by Pain

In the Spirit of
(stand alone)

White Hawk Trilogy
Chains of Illusion
Chains of Challenge
Chains of Lineage